A Lost Relationship Comments

beautiful written.thanks for sharing

I like this poem. The nature imagery is a perfect metPhor for death and rebirth of love in new forms. Bravo!

Yes - through time's passage the existence is lost, relationship also fades away, which is a pity. but definitely ushers a new era for the new comers (here the buds) ...... very nice

wow. so easily said and done ..but then again, that's how it is very nicely put, ma'am

Excellent poem about life, it makes one wonder about tomorrow. Siya_! !

The last two lines are a shock! This is life. Nice poem.

Such weight in so few words: ^) This is just so lovely.....thanks for sharing your art. Love Roobs xxx

This is a lovely poem about life.

Is there any pessimistic tone that rings like a sad music? I feel so.Superb!

Trees never worry about lost petals and birds, It just waits for a new season to boom.... A loving heart is never a looser, it is a born winner. Those who don't deserve they will loose that Lovely heart and become a looser forever...... Nice, poignant poem

Tiny buds awaken - new relationship blooms! Simple words, nice flow. Thank you.

Another new beginning for another love lost. It made me think, however, for it's cost The bloom that was shared for someone Has come and being given to a new one...

in every end a new start and this is the transformation of nature in life (where is a lost there is again) nice poem about the flow of time in us/ well done Heather

Natures cycle the power of the flower explained to the tee in this seasonal poem...regards

but the new relationships sprouts from the new beginning..a beautiful poem