A Lost Poodle Comments

You create and keep the suspense very nicely. I was beginning to expect something not so pleasant.

a very fine poetic narration...well done! ! ! 10+++

oh, i thought...ha ha..this is a pleasure to read, Sandra. Glad that it is only a dream.Well, you really is a good story teller, and you made your readers excited for the next episode.Really a great write.. Common, Sandra..another part II like this..bravo...Ha ha ha

very high choice of words and ecstasy flowing in your poem.... do read mine as well.....

a bad dream narrated well in good style...thanks Sandra...10

wonderful poetry.. me likes........

Wow, you sure can paint some haunting (and forlorn) images. Kept me on the hook till the very last second.

amazing & touching i'm sure that every one will read it twice as i did & he'll be attracted & taken by the poem.wow

compact wording beautiful imageries! fine! 10+

a skillful narration. shan

WOW SANDRA! Who kept me on tanterhooks till the last letter........what a thriller.........your descriptive talents are simply superb. My friend, Ngiel Beck another good poet of this site writes this type of thrillers. He is an expert. You very much reminded him

Narrative poetry is fast becoming another trade mark to add to your Senyru. The crackling of leaves is really effective as is the shouting and darkness. I could just see the Mother, and Tipper wagging his tail when he he wakes up. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

Beautiful imagery, haunting dream. I am so glad the little boy awoke to see both his mother and his beloved Tipper. Happy endings are always food for the soul.10/10. Love, Sandra X

loved it.. dreams bring so many things... just as does your story

Hey sandra.. this is a different by yours.. Hey your friend Michael Harmon says good poem should have four Ms.. music, myth, magic, mystery... I feel this got it all.. I specially like narrative type poems.. This in most ways an entertaining to read.... lovess shan

entertaining poem sandra...grippy through out...you maintained the suspense...10

The incredible diversity of the stories told by the subconscious mind is revealed with a pleasant shock in this clever poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

I enjoyed this a great deal, Sandra. A very solidly entertaining poem. Aahh, the dream at last... :)

Oh a dream! please note, when you are searching for your Pet, which is missing, it can be really bad, cause Pets are so cute, like children when they are small. Nice and entertaining write, though it was heart-breaking in between.10+++