A Lost Mind Comments

oh! the last two lines...very much touching, Marilyn...they fully bring out the pain in you...10

This may be short but in truth it tells a thousand words, having seen this debilitating disease first hand also with a family member, is heart breaking to watch, a fine poem on a terrible subject.

Lovingly penned by a caring sister. Top marks from me.

This short little verse offers alot, very well placed tone and structure, and that of depth within has its own merrits.......