A Lost Love Comments

Like a ship setting sail at sea With her Maker, she's gone to be... Beautiful couplet

In my arms, she met her death A broken body all that's left Lovingly her eyes I close Petals dropping from this blooming rose Cancer, .. a piece of me is gone for ever............ such tragic and sad poem... want to cry with u dear poet. tony

An insightful depiction of a sad story, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Billy.

Well mirrored; well rhymed. Such a sad poem. 10+++

Sweet poem of remembrance. T.

A beautiful poem. Reminded me of someone I once knew.

A touching poem, an impressive poem, a poem to remember!

there are two reason people pass away where I am from cancer or heart failure. it's tragic but its true...wish everybody healthy every day...

My love, no more to be; but, hope lies ahead! Nice work.

Beautiful, your poem brought me to tears. I could feel your anguish and helpless ness Thank you for sharing

Beautiful, this poem brought me to tears. I feel your anguish and helplessness Thank you for sharing

Beautiful, your poem brought me to tears, I can feel the anguish and helplessness. Thank you for sharing

A very emotional and heartfelt poem, Billy. Thanks Peace