Saturday, June 30, 2018

A Lost Leaf Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lost leaf

Am I happy or drowned in grief
I find myself flowing in the air, like a lost leaf.
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Sunita Chandla
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Rich in rhyme and reflection that releases wisdom to learn from the past! Well done my friend!

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Lovely lines loaded with lessons for Lonliness, life and love!

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 July 2018

Write comment. A nice poem, Sunita. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Sunita Chandla 30 June 2018

Thank you all for reading with an equal sensitivity I penned this poetry

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Bharati Nayak 30 June 2018

Winds changed without a thunder God whispered, O! What a wonder Grieve not for a closed door For you a lot is better in store - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Do your best and fear not the unseen A cherished leaf always remains green.- - - -Such a beautiful poem about life's hurdles faced when the poet felt like a lost leaf, but what a great closing line- - -A cherished leaf always remains green.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 June 2018

Sunita, such an inspiring poem...10++++

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