Wednesday, February 10, 2016

A Lost Hiker Comments

Rating: 5.0

You enjoy to take a risk it's your right,
Let me know before leaving that night.

I tell you being with friends or a coach,
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Abderrahmane Dakir
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Roseann Shawiak 18 February 2016

Excellent poem, with great advice for sure! Yes whenever you go climbing never go alone, you never know what will happen. You need to have someone with you when doing something dangerous.10++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Abderrahmane Dakir 24 February 2016

Thank you so much Roseann for reading. I enjoyed your comment.

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Mj Lemon 17 February 2016

This is a great poem. It conveys a message we all need to heed- -think before taking risk. Harm that comes may not come only to oneself. Thanks for sharing.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 18 February 2016

Thank you Lemon for your awesome comment.

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Driss Ezzireg 10 February 2016

Very original nice writing about the loss of a dear person. Thank you Si Abderrahmane for sharing.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 10 February 2016

Thank you si Driss for reading.

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