Tuesday, January 23, 2007

A Lost Cause Comments

Rating: 4.5

They think they are in control
They think they know it all
They think they are better
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Khairul Ahsan 21 February 2015

This is a beautiful poem. A poem of reassurance, a poem of faith. At the same time, terming it as a 'lost cause', the poet has devalued her own assessment, may be because: 'Cause you’ve lost all feeling Cause you’ve lost all hope Cause you’ve lost the reality that helped you cope'. Nice that the poem ends on an optimistic expectation: ' And for a moment I would like to you to pause To think about this life and how it truly is Instead of being me who thinks about all that is missed' Over all, a very nice poem. A poem that speaks.

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