A Lost Cause Comments
With her eyes wandering along the kerbside of his face,
she forgot what she was looking for.
Her face is submerged in a surprised frown,
as her facial staccato resolves into innocent laughter.
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The magical images like ‘endorphin storm', ‘memories … cruel', he sitting ‘in the armoured tank'..etc conjure up an ethereal atmosphere for the poem. It is no wonder ‘ she forgot the narrative she felt she was knitting.' Loved the poem. Top score. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you, I am happy that the images compose the state of mind / situation in the moment we forget things or are unwillingly remembered of them. The last stanza was intended to see it from the perspective of neural networks.
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7/21/2025 5:19:35 PM # 1.0.0
2) the images powerfully depicts the gangrene that has set in in the relationship…maybe irreparable…. The sadness in the poem is profound…
Your comment means the so much to me at the moment, thank you for your appreciation of the sadness. Indeed, the irreversible nature of [the] past was intended.