A Lost Cause Poem by Alyx True Edge

A Lost Cause

Rating: 5.0

With her eyes wandering along the kerbside of his face,
she forgot what she was looking for.
Her face is submerged in a surprised frown,
as her facial staccato resolves into innocent laughter.

With his bare feet ploughing through the eternal beach,
he lost his destiny under iridescent sand.
His veins pulsating in disordered rhythms of a lost cause,
as his smart watch flings open the gates for an endorphin storm.

With her coarse, ancient fingers, following the white thread,
she forgot the narrative she felt she was knitting.
Her mind adhering to moments of alienated daughters gone,
as scissors severe the yarn and fingers lose their grip.

With his staring into space, currents collect memories so cruel,
in dormant alertness he still sits in the armoured tank.
His currents fail to meet the grounds in their locked levitation,
as we err around lighter alleys, confabulated narratives unspool.

['A Lost Cause' by Alyx True Edge,2024]

Tuesday, July 23, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: identity,loss,poems,memory,memories,trauma,truth,time,poem,chaos,alienation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 15 September 2024

2) the images powerfully depicts the gangrene that has set in in the relationship…maybe irreparable…. The sadness in the poem is profound…

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Alyx True Edge 21 September 2024

Your comment means the so much to me at the moment, thank you for your appreciation of the sadness. Indeed, the irreversible nature of [the] past was intended.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 15 September 2024

The magical images like ‘endorphin storm', ‘memories … cruel', he sitting ‘in the armoured tank'..etc conjure up an ethereal atmosphere for the poem. It is no wonder ‘ she forgot the narrative she felt she was knitting.' Loved the poem. Top score. Thank you for sharing.

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Alyx True Edge 21 September 2024

Thank you, I am happy that the images compose the state of mind / situation in the moment we forget things or are unwillingly remembered of them. The last stanza was intended to see it from the perspective of neural networks.

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