Tuesday, June 1, 2010

A Loss Comments

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In the sky I fly like a bird
my tears fall down as I scream to be heard
as I pass through the clouds a sadness accrues
at the moment I remember my mom saying i love you
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Gregory PierreJerome
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Bert Bell 28 October 2010

Very nice, Gregory. A lovely tribute to your mother. I feel your pain as I have also lost mine.

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Cleide Tatyana Almeida 20 July 2010

this is an extremely sad poem. it really makes you reflect upon death and brings old wounds to the surface but the purity and intensity of the love you had for your mother takes the sting out of the pain. It's beautiful

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