A Look Yet Into The Blue Comments

subhendu, It is sad, but fine dark blue poems... Sincerely, Tsira

very beautiful write...i truely enjoy reading it

Excellent images and fine diction.Abrupt ending adds to the charm of presentation.A good poem that deserves TEN....

You have a perfect way in describing your works with words so definitely wonderful and beautiful..I admire very much how you put your words so nicely penned..A nice write indeed! Love, Meggie

You offer your reader a rich smorgasborg of images from which to choose in this lyrical, emotionally charged poem. Love your use of enjambment and your idiosyncratic way with words: 'Jiiggling alone on the shadow of sands the prisoner of guilt behind the glossless bone'; that is original and always intensely poetic. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

This poem is really nice kept attention the whole time. Very good write! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Can wait to read more in time to come. ASARE SAMUEL STICKYPHYN'S BABII GIRLL

Your descriptions are the flow that to me states the renowned style of India.. beautifully adorned.. and yes 'so speechless pain when entreated by the tears....' your last 2 lines close the poem perfect.