Tuesday, June 12, 2007

A Look, Two Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

A look. Two eyes
Filled with yearning.
A look. Two eyes
Gently burning
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Mike Tonkin
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Ruth Walters 20 December 2012

similar to the previous poem in style, cleverly holding the reader.....

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Original Unknown Girl 21 June 2007

This is stunning, I love it, so intense, so romantic. The eyes have it.... as they say. Great work here. HG: -) xx

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Who's Erwhatsit 17 June 2007

Intense and beautifully honest words. DK

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Mike Tonkin

Mike Tonkin

Truro, England
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