Thursday, January 27, 2011

A Look On His Face Comments

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It was just a look, upon his face,
But whenever I saw it, I knew my place.
Popi never hit me, he didn't have to.
Just a look on his face, told me what to do.
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Juan Olivarez
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Smoky Hoss 30 January 2011

Wonderful words, showing great love and respect. Very nicely done.

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Lynn Glover 28 January 2011

Beautifully written, Juan, and I instilled that same look in the memories of my children. All I had to do was look and they understood. A great poem. Lynn

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Midnight Butterfly 27 January 2011

Aww I know that look too, I saw it on my grandma's face many times, it is the look that deserves respect, you write so beautifully.

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