A Longing For Long Blankness Comments

A nice poetic imagination, Narayanan. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

what a theme it is blankness describes! ! ! ! ! can't even think of anything such awesome

this is a gr88 poem..i like the poem for its simplicity and flow...superb...please read my new poems

Friend, how how wisely you gave shape to the blankness of mind by extending its horizon towards the Almighty God who inspired all of us to sail in this journey of life. Nice theme.

great one, written so elegantly! I try to find a reason for blankness. If somebody avoid us we hurts, if somebody care us, we felt very happy . If nobody care us or nobody avoid us then we felt blankness. Am i right? your work is really thought provoking! happy to read this! ! !

I am so amazed and speachless, you converted your words in an exquisite and wise poem, a higher level of consciousness and understanding by God grace..Cristina Teodor