Thursday, May 7, 2009

A Long Worthy Race Comments

Rating: 5.0

They see us, they laugh, they turn their backs.
They mock the cross and cut us no slack.
With cold cruel eyes and hearts like stone.
The world is dark with no love shown.
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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And the prize is knowing that Jesus is coming! ! ! !

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Naidz Ladia 14 May 2009

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious..goodday.......your piece is very nice..to win the game is not easy to do..race is a contest..courage, and patience is a must...goodluck to a winner..naizz

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Emily Oldham 11 May 2009

brilliant religious poem with a deeper meaning.......... thanks

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Payyton. this is a supercalifralisticexpealidotious poem

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Surya . 10 May 2009

hi it is a poem written right words/phrases and is worth reading.nice work.posted 10 for u love surya

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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