Saturday, February 23, 2019

A Long Time Ago- Longing For Home Comments

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I'm longing for home
It's been way too long
Have I forgotten your face
After being together for so long
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Pleasant Dabbs
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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 February 2019

The precarious condition in which growing children find themselves when sent away from home and dad and the turmoil of their thoughts beautifully portrayed. Thanks for sharing.

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Christopher 28 February 2019

The poem wasn't suggesting a precarious condition at all. Better yet the feelings and thoughts of a child of God who has come down to earth and is looking forward to his return home.

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Practicing Poetess 23 February 2019

Christopher, this is a wonderfully touching poem- - Enjoyed it immensely. Please do continue writing!

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Christopher 28 February 2019

Thank you for your read and am grateful that the feeling and sentiment of the message was able to touch you. Those indeed are my feelings and I await anxiously that day. c aaron

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