Sunday, January 15, 2012

A Long Road Comments

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Life is so strange
With almost nothing to gain
The sun shining on my face
Why is this such a long race?
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Afolabi Boluwatife 'muyiwa 16 January 2012

Very cool...but I think the rhymes limited the emotions you wanted to pour out into the poem....

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