A Long, Long, Time! Comments

Expressive imagry. Intelligent, observational reference to mournful allusion. Like His use of questive terminology. Simple and effective!

Very sober, it reminds me of a girl who was a close friend of mine, who sadly is out of my life. A good heartfelt write

I really like this poem. Good one and very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing it. Sincerely, Connie Webb

Two pieces of driftwood floating in a pond eventually come together. Lovely poem. All the Best. Colin J...

nicely written... alittle piece of your heart? ?

Wow! ! ! ! Gee you sure make words fit nicely together! ! ! I'll remind myself it's old stuff...but still very good stuff! Hugs, Dee