A Long Journey Along A Narrow Path Comments

Great penning :) I really enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing.

very nice and catchy theme.

Wide vision and broadmind is enough to walk a long long time in the narrow path it dosen`t effect, nice job.

Though it is narrow, it is everything! This narrow path of human life is beautifully penned! Nice work.

Nice piece of conscious-craft with word-art. Yes, a narrow path but if relativity applied...the narrowness expands so wide...seems to be a drink not only exhaust-maker. It also can carry us piercing the galaxy throughout a single night. Good poem. 10++++ Regards, pranab