Tuesday, April 6, 2010

A Long Dress Comments

Rating: 2.5

That is the current that makes machinery, that makes it crackle,
what is the current that presents a long line and a necessary waist. What is this current.
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Levi Mccool Strauss 28 January 2018

Thank You Chinedu

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Viktor Mylora 16 March 2016

is the poem about a dress? Maybe of the making of - - currency yes electricity, currency as money, current fashion, the long line - assembly line = look at in this way

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Viktor Mylora 16 March 2016

it is on the slavery of the workers not the dress itself the current - currency, social flow, electricity to run the machines,

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John S 30 October 2013

I don't know if I'm missing something here (I probably am since I don't really get the point this poem is trying to make) someone please explain to me what that point is. Unless someone presents me with some deep insight, this is one of the worst poems presented as a poem of the day. Go ahead and give me a thumbs down for being honest.

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Peter Stavropoulos 30 October 2012

Very clever. Almost brilliant.

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Kevin Straw 30 October 2012

Yawn! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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