A Long-Distance Marriage Comments

And we flitted around like happy butterflies......I just look at the simile. A beautiful poem.

Such things are not far off to happen! What is more important is the ceremonies associated with the marriage and not the relationship that is to stretch a whole life time! A very imaginative picture of what will happen in modern times! Great write Jasbir!

With some of the most amazing expressions, the poem offers a serious commentary on the fragile or rather disjointed relationships in the modern age society. Thanks a lot, Jasbir ji, for sharing this piece.

great topic, great, it is a short story indeed.great style.wish more success.god bless your pen.

Words meant to be whispered into someone's ears Lost their way and strayed off the screen Into someone else's eyes; Like misdirected missiles. very often such things happen and it causes separation, problems of fidelity. thank u for writing about it.. dear Jasbir Chatterjee. tony