Thursday, May 29, 2008

A Long Day Is Over Comments

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Earth was rotating, clock ticked perfectly right
Day seemed so long, though world was a usual sight

A girl came to my shop, wanted to buy a life
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Mohit Dhawan
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Deepti Agarwal 29 May 2008

this is a beauty... u got feelings on paper so tenderly... thumbs up t u... :)

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Katie Unknown 29 May 2008

wow. breath taking poem. well writen!

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