Monday, September 14, 2020

A Long Burning Log Fire On A Cold Winter's Evening Comments

Rating: 5.0

chill winter winds can blow knife blade keen
cutting skin flesh to flayed bone when winter bites
childlike we wish for shelter friendly fireside heath
comfort companionship safe as warm as wonderful
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Terence George Craddock
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Kostas Lagos 14 September 2020

Excellent way of writing!

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 September 2020

the heart to draw into long moments of meaning perhaps surrender into heart soul deep embraces.....beautiful the sestet; life is recoiling in the heart of dream, hope, desire, feelings, passion, like, love.........! this feelings is binding with imagination; sometimes this imagination leads to the ultimate goal of it though there is no ultimate stoppage of desire, demand of mind yet on the coil of love life finds some tranquil, peace of living traffic jam!

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