Wednesday, December 5, 2007

A Lonesome Heart Comments

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As I wake up every morning
My life losses its meaning
Finding you not around
Makes this feeling down
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Aijaz Asif 28 July 2008

very beautifully written, marvin....thanks

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Sandra Fowler 13 December 2007

Very touching. Your closing lines are especially effective. Praise for a very fine piece. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sherry Arzish 07 December 2007

you are good at words as well as the philosphy of the poem, thankyou for sharing by the way i was really flattered on your comments at schizophrenia my poem.thanks again stay in touch sherry

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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