A lonely tear falls down
A smile turns into a frown
Trickles down the cheek
doesn't it make you weak
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'The lonely tear is gone Life will carry on'... Positive thinking there Vanessa...wise...life has to witness so many dawns...brighter than the ones that set Good poem...the words bring out the emotions inside in a most sober and subdued tone
a mass of feelings are in this poem........... nice........ i like it, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***
a wonderful poem. thank you for sharing such a wonderful write! all someone needs is a friend and for the moment, i'm sure the bad things will end. if only for a moment. **10**
Emotional tear..at the end to realise the value of love to free from somberness...good poem