Tuesday, September 4, 2012

A Lonely Star Comments

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There is a very cold winter time.
The streets are filled with snow,
A lonely star's shining in the sky.
I'm looking at her from my home.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 October 2021

Great piece! Loved reading it.

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Valentin Savin 21 November 2021

Thank you very much, dear Dr Dillip.

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Koena Mokoena 10 February 2021

Hi! Thanks a lot for reading my poem i.e i am alone, i am proud that i have changed your life. I have also read im a lonely star & it changed my life as i like to succeed alone. Koena

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Khairul Ahsan 05 April 2020

I have similar feelings as you have mentioned in the poem, when I look at a lonely star through my bedroom window or when I stand in my home balcony. That's why I could relate to the feelings expressed. A nice poem.

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Luo Zhihai 16 July 2019

What a beautiful lone star! Autoplay next video There is a very cold winter time. The streets are filled with snow, A lonely star's shining in the sky. I'm looking at her from my home. What a beautiful lone star!

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Valentin Savin 17 July 2019

Thank you very much, dear Luo.

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Prabir Gayen 22 February 2019

She wants to quit the heaven's shelf, To warm up in the bed of mine. (Being sad and lonely like myself) . I'll gladly give her bread and wine. .....beautiful imagery....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 February 2019

A lonely star has been painted beautifully on the canvas of this marvelous poem. Every stanza stands out with superb imagery and great rhyme.

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Prabir Gayen 27 January 2019

Very beautiful poem ❤ ❤ ❤..

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Thomas Kane 20 January 2019

Excellent poem gets my gears turning this morning!

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Valentin Savin 20 January 2019

Thank you very much, Thomas!

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Binayakumar Mohanty 18 October 2018

Ncely crafted poem.Thanks for sharing.

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Valentin Savin 20 October 2018

Thank you very much, for the nice comment. It's very kind of you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 August 2018

She wants to quit the heaven's shelf, To warm up in the bed of mine. (Being sad and lonely like myself) . I'll gladly give her bread and wine. giving bread and wine to the star……. Wonderful Imagination my dear Poet. i love your simplicity of language and presentation.. thank u. tony

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valentin savin 01 September 2018

Thank you ever so much, Dr.tony!

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valentin savin 09 July 2018

Dear Bri, Thank you very much for your visit and most precious comments to my own poem (not translation) . There are very few of my English poems posted here. English is not my native tongue. I have pretty many poems written in the Russian language. I do not translate them into English. I translate mostly the old timers - very popular poems. You are among the rarest poets whom I like and translate.

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Bri Edwards 08 July 2018

(cont.) .. i 'love' this poem. to MyPoemList. but, WATCH OUT! any star is apt to be pretty HOT, and i don't mean hot like sexy, though i've never 'slept with' a star. welllllllllllllllllllllll, there WERE a few movie star(let) s i slept with years ago in Hollywood AND Bollywood to boot. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 08 July 2018

(cont.) ... i understand, certainly: And why she's lingering so long? .... in the U.S. (or anywhere) i, Bri, would say And why's she lingering so long? ANSWER: females take their sweet time, especially when I'M in a hurry! ! (cont.)

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valentin savin 09 July 2018

I accept your editions to this poem and accept them. I mean the line - And why's she lingering so long? As to the verb to scurry (scurrying) it was just misspelling. I meant that people were in a hurry moving to and fro. My star is not a movie or any other living star. She is not hot. My star's temperature is 80 degrees Fahrenheit (25 degrees Celsius) . Val

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Bri Edwards 08 July 2018

scarring? ? ? i hope NOT! try scurrying. scur·ry ˈskərē/ verb gerund or present participle: scurrying (of a person or small animal) move hurriedly with short quick steps. (cont.) ..

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valentin savin 09 July 2018

Please read the first line as follows. I appreciate your editions to this poem and accept them.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 December 2017

How can she see me from afar? And why she's lingering so long? Perhaps she is my guiding star. It'll be a pity if I'm wrong.......what a kind of great wish to say she wants to quit the heavens to come to me to my bed to warm me with her love play......... fine imagination dear poet.. thank you. tony

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Roseann Shawiak 18 January 2016

Very touching, a little mystical essence emanating from the lonely star. Stirring the loneliness within, as it shines down upon earth. Really lovely and heart touching poem. Enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Valentin Savin 19 January 2016

Thank you for your nice comment. It's a pleasure for me to hear your kind words.

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Sayeed Abubakar 05 January 2016

Well-versed. You are skilled enough in rhythm. Congratulation.

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Valentin Savin 04 September 2012

Thanks, Eindaray, for your comment. I'm glad that you seem to understand what i meant to say. It's my first try.

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Eindaray Kyaw 04 September 2012

I can see what do you want to mean because of your great sense of creating an easy but lovely flow! !

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