A Lonely Star Comments
There is a very cold winter time.
The streets are filled with snow,
A lonely star's shining in the sky.
I'm looking at her from my home.
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Hi! Thanks a lot for reading my poem i.e i am alone, i am proud that i have changed your life. I have also read im a lonely star & it changed my life as i like to succeed alone. Koena
I have similar feelings as you have mentioned in the poem, when I look at a lonely star through my bedroom window or when I stand in my home balcony. That's why I could relate to the feelings expressed. A nice poem.
What a beautiful lone star! Autoplay next video There is a very cold winter time. The streets are filled with snow, A lonely star's shining in the sky. I'm looking at her from my home. What a beautiful lone star!
She wants to quit the heaven's shelf, To warm up in the bed of mine. (Being sad and lonely like myself) . I'll gladly give her bread and wine. .....beautiful imagery....
A lonely star has been painted beautifully on the canvas of this marvelous poem. Every stanza stands out with superb imagery and great rhyme.
Thank you very much, for the nice comment. It's very kind of you.
She wants to quit the heaven's shelf, To warm up in the bed of mine. (Being sad and lonely like myself) . I'll gladly give her bread and wine. giving bread and wine to the star……. Wonderful Imagination my dear Poet. i love your simplicity of language and presentation.. thank u. tony
Dear Bri, Thank you very much for your visit and most precious comments to my own poem (not translation) . There are very few of my English poems posted here. English is not my native tongue. I have pretty many poems written in the Russian language. I do not translate them into English. I translate mostly the old timers - very popular poems. You are among the rarest poets whom I like and translate.
(cont.) .. i 'love' this poem. to MyPoemList. but, WATCH OUT! any star is apt to be pretty HOT, and i don't mean hot like sexy, though i've never 'slept with' a star. welllllllllllllllllllllll, there WERE a few movie star(let) s i slept with years ago in Hollywood AND Bollywood to boot. bri :)
(cont.) ... i understand, certainly: And why she's lingering so long? .... in the U.S. (or anywhere) i, Bri, would say And why's she lingering so long? ANSWER: females take their sweet time, especially when I'M in a hurry! ! (cont.)
I accept your editions to this poem and accept them. I mean the line - And why's she lingering so long? As to the verb to scurry (scurrying) it was just misspelling. I meant that people were in a hurry moving to and fro. My star is not a movie or any other living star. She is not hot. My star's temperature is 80 degrees Fahrenheit (25 degrees Celsius) . Val
scarring? ? ? i hope NOT! try scurrying. scur·ry ˈskərē/ verb gerund or present participle: scurrying (of a person or small animal) move hurriedly with short quick steps. (cont.) ..
Please read the first line as follows. I appreciate your editions to this poem and accept them.
How can she see me from afar? And why she's lingering so long? Perhaps she is my guiding star. It'll be a pity if I'm wrong.......what a kind of great wish to say she wants to quit the heavens to come to me to my bed to warm me with her love play......... fine imagination dear poet.. thank you. tony
Very touching, a little mystical essence emanating from the lonely star. Stirring the loneliness within, as it shines down upon earth. Really lovely and heart touching poem. Enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Thank you for your nice comment. It's a pleasure for me to hear your kind words.
Well-versed. You are skilled enough in rhythm. Congratulation.
Thanks, Eindaray, for your comment. I'm glad that you seem to understand what i meant to say. It's my first try.
I can see what do you want to mean because of your great sense of creating an easy but lovely flow! !
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Great piece! Loved reading it.
Thank you very much, dear Dr Dillip.