A Lonely Star Comments

Lovely poem! It's sure in the sky, the star still has the moon. It's not lonely. ^^

Poor lonely star and poor lonely poet.Your loneliness shall not continue for the sum must rise and the pain go away.

simple innocence in your poem attracts me and the desire to have a friend. loneliness is a very good theme.. thank u for sharing

Nice poem, a beautiful one! ! ! Even the whole poem was written literally, we can also see a moral true behind the same.A true and real friendship is everything that we need and try to achieve nowdays in a word corrupted by the ambition, greed.There are a lot of lonely stars outside there looking for someone to be with.Congratulations! ! ! ! Keep writting...10

Very nice poem, We stay lonely and die lonely. You will be a famous poet.

Nice images. All readers will surly remember this one for long. Good thought well penned.

Simple but beautiful poem.Yes, moon is also lonely.Nice thought.Thanks dear Nader.

A lonely star in the sky...... cause no one intend..... very nice poem. short but interesting, wish it was long. thanks for sharing.10++

'Let the moon be your friend, And don't care about the end'... simple sincere and innocent are these words...so could be this young poetess! nice and enjoyable piece Wassila...10

A nice poem to enjoy :)

Wassila, Last four lines are beautiful. God Bless and Happy New Year.

poems with comments galore usually don't get mine, but since you asked...This is, I guess you could say, one of those poems that makes quite the impression because of it's short yet touching work of imagination. I don't adore it, but I like it.

Poor lonely star, Let the moon be your friend, And don't care about the end. Cause the moon is also lonely friend... No one even thought about this imagination to say that the moon is lonely.. we always put the moon as witness on our love or to light or nights very good imagination take 20 not just 10

tooooooooooooooooooooooooo good.short n swt

Nice and simple poem....love it. :)

Very good, simple, eloquent.

its not lonley because im here always in the sky with it

im not sure what you meant by 'or no occur' but i like the symbolism of stars. and how they are all distant from eachother. But in the right perspective, standing a great distance away, they only seem inches away. Perhaps that is the view one must take to realize that they are loved.

i normally don't like poems that ryhme, but that was really great

wonderful metaphorical poem, belonging to symbolism, lovely to read..10