A Lonely Star (2) Comments

Loneliness is a greatest myth.

the pangs of loneliness are worst than death...well depicted in this emotional poem

I thank you with all my heart for writing this one...thank you so much.

Perfect dear friend please allow me to say wat Aashka Thakkar said that ur inner soul is good and carries alot of feelings

ur inner soul is good

Wassila... a compassionate poem recognizing the pain of others... very nice.

Good reasoning, good to see people showin concern about this world. I go with Kareem Hany, there is always hope for the lonely star.

poor moon........... sum 1 has to save him!

why is it that much sad? ? ...actually i started to realize that no one is important for another...i mean that (me) is not important for anyone so i shall not wait for anyone to care about it...thats why i should be the one caring for myself...althuogh on the other hand, i still think we are not so lonely, there are always people around...but we shall not wait for their real love and care

nice and sweet poems (lonely star 1 & 2) .. but there's always hope for the lonely star that can be not lonely later :) .. maybe

Good work Wassila...Now nobody is lonely anymore for they have Wassila on their side. So sweet of you. A sweet 10. Ranjit.

another star which is alone: o(oh my....its just awesome this poem contains very good narative 10+

A soliloquy...a good intention of verses.... And I agree with Ahmed with his suggestion...

i like the way you express your emotions, but you have some grammatical mistakes. try to avoid them in the future please check out my poem 'i am my own exorcist'. comments and rates are highly appreciated

Lots of lonely people in this world.

Wassila, this is the first poem I've read today that moved me. You really have a way of expressing emotion. I love the follow up..... looking forward to 'A lonely star (3) '

So I'm still alone, And I'll stay forever alone like him, I wont fly, but i'll cry Till I die Cause no one in the sky cares or even try to be my friend............bautiful verse writtenwithhonesy and dedication..true expression of selfless love..i loved it all thetime....10 read mine ....cry not....mary to marry...

dear wassila keep writing and you will find friends you've already found one, terence

my dear I feel this feeling some time but I don't rise the flag.u must do the same u & the other.good job

violently perfect poem stars are always alone even they are too many but they are separated