Saturday, September 9, 2017

A Lonely Soul Comments

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The best part of me is not what I keep for myself
But a piece which I give to those who need
The part which I cannot appreciate
Because it makes me
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Doris Cornago
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 September 2017

Because it makes me Vulnerable Out In The open Likely to be hurt Again, but it's part of Who I am Nicely penned. 10

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Doris Cornago 09 September 2017

Hi Subhas. Yes, it's a blurb from the inner universe transmitted to my fingers. Thank you for appreciating my interpretation, but not my own creation. :)

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Rajnish Manga 09 September 2017

It is a masterpiece, Dear Doris. A very noble approach which needs to be emulated by all. Thanks.

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Doris Cornago 09 September 2017

Hi Rajnish. I truly believe that all men have compassion but the fear of being hurt prevents them from reaching out. There are also those who will say kindness cannot be practiced with the heart, but with the brain, to be weighed against consequences. So, yes, it's nobility that makes us do it, above all warnings. So, yes, let's try to emulate what it is to be humane. :)

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