A Lonely Smile Comments

Heart touching in every sentence. The gloom and confusion will linger in the reader's mind for days.

orphans need some love and care, nice write about an orphan, i liked it

Could feel your heart right through your poem. Beautiful my friend, wonderful heart you have! ; D

o sree, , it is very nice poem. Went near him spoke lovingly, And touched his lovable face, Raised his little head and looked upon me, Tiny lips widened to a cute adorable smile… your kind heart and the way you end the poem is so o nice. it touched me and i was in tears as i read these lines. his smile is your reward sree. thank u

Excellent Well composed poem and Well expressed of feelings. Thanks for sharing with me 10++++

Elegiac [A mournful] poetry …passionately worded wreathed.. wrung by all bosom You’ve carried me to that height of passion…and planted in my psyche…what is next? Where is the next? When will it end? Who’ll extend loving and caressing hand? Ma’am it’s too much for wee bosom…why you can feel it… 10++ [as prayers for the orphans] Ms. Nivedita UK

very thoughtful and heart touching

You really managed to move me as a reader Your compassion and sympathy is so nicely expressed that it stirs us to feel with the child and give him a place in our prayers. Thinking still about the why... We just may have to accept that a lot of things happen in our world for reasons we cannot understand.

Congratulations on your well composed poem.

A poem pulsating with the pathos of an orphan child and the warmth of the poet that is remarkable! I rate it 9/10. You have masterly expressed your feelings. Thanks.