Sunday, March 27, 2011

'A Lonely Rose' Comments

Rating: 3.4

Something must've happened over time
no one seem to ever ask for me,
maybe I've lost my significance
or the world's going through a catastrophe,
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Bernard Snyder
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Edward Kofi Louis 23 June 2015

no one seem to ever ask of me. But, life goes on. Nice work.

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Heather Wilkins 24 August 2013

the rose is a lovely metaphor. wisely used a good write good imagery

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Adeline Foster 05 February 2013

Good thoughts in this one. Read mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline

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Silentpoet Grl 27 October 2011

great poem with emotion written in it.

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Rachel Butler 27 October 2011

'Maybe people don't love anymore which would make me totally worthless I may as well become extinct' RAB

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Hans Vr 17 April 2011

Very good poem. Good to write as the flower in the first person. I like that a lot. I think 'for me' and 'catastrophe' forms a great and original 'rhyme' The message is very clear and I like it a lot. A very important bit of wisdom lies in these very melodious lines.

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Rekha Mandagere 01 April 2011

Beautiful poem. Nice imagery is used here and poem has a philosophical depth. Thanks. Rekhamandagere.

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Bernard Snyder

Bernard Snyder

Savannah Ga.
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