Something must've happened over time
no one seem to ever ask for me,
maybe I've lost my significance
or the world's going through a catastrophe,
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the rose is a lovely metaphor. wisely used a good write good imagery
Good thoughts in this one. Read mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline
'Maybe people don't love anymore which would make me totally worthless I may as well become extinct' RAB
Very good poem. Good to write as the flower in the first person. I like that a lot. I think 'for me' and 'catastrophe' forms a great and original 'rhyme' The message is very clear and I like it a lot. A very important bit of wisdom lies in these very melodious lines.
Beautiful poem. Nice imagery is used here and poem has a philosophical depth. Thanks. Rekhamandagere.
no one seem to ever ask of me. But, life goes on. Nice work.