Saturday, February 17, 2018

A Lonely Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The desire that was seeded by dusk,
My heart was twice baked to be a rusk,
My soul by the hot fire of the sadness
Still waiting you with my madness
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 October 2022

An excellent poem. It gives me a lot of pleasure in reading this outstanding poem multiple times!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 April 2018

A poem of love and loneliness that holds us spellbound. Magnificent write.10

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Rini Shibu 01 March 2018

Beautifully penned about love and missing..10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 February 2018

A lovely poem! Beautiful photo.....My favorite lines: When I shall awake with a desire changed in a sigh, Could I sleep in my dreams till you fly in the sky so high! ....Thanks for sharing dear sir...10

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pramila khadun 17 February 2018

Lovely composition dear Akhtar, it held my breath, really.Love it

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