Friday, November 21, 2008

A Lonely Leaf Comments

Rating: 5.0

A lonely golden
leaf falling gently
to the river below,
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james foulk
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Saiom Shriver 31 March 2012

Perhaps not.. maybe a struggling bug will need a life raft. Your poem is very sad...you grab us in!

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Bonnie Collins 24 November 2008

What a beautifull write about natures final stage of her life... Very well penned and wiht much imagination... Bonnie

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Ron Flowers 24 November 2008

A beautiful poem dipicting a sign of fall.

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Sandra Fowler 22 November 2008

May this gold leaf go where all good leaves go at last. Beautiful poem. Warm regards, Sandra

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