To the moment I can write
In presence of my breath
With evidence of my veins strength
That I feel lonely on earth
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It reads even better the second time. Such a creative and compelling composition!
Loaded with love and loneliness. A creative and compelling composition!
My dear Abhi, your words ever so laced with emotions... Simple yet loaded. Great piece
Hai abhimanyu Sir You writing very wel and meaningful, poems thought nearest to humanity values.
Very good poems...To the moment I can write In presence of my breath
That I feel lonely on earth Under the roof of almighty I miss her to the extent The very extent of my existence. expression of beautiful sentiments in selected words...... thank you very m uch dear poet... love to read you......... tony
so subtle yet effective... i loved the line..'That I feel lonely on earth under the roof of almighty' thnx for sharing (:
Your style is unique and too nice, keep it up
Good one keep it up, i really love it More Grease to your Elbow
It's so sad..you seem to know how to use words to express yourself..well done! !
I envy the way you express your feeling, urge you to move on.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful love poem. Thanks for sharing Kumar.