Tuesday, November 1, 2011

A Lonely Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

To the moment I can write
In presence of my breath
With evidence of my veins strength
That I feel lonely on earth
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Chinedu Dike 01 March 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful love poem. Thanks for sharing Kumar.

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It reads even better the second time. Such a creative and compelling composition!

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Loaded with love and loneliness. A creative and compelling composition!

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Sarab 15 December 2017

Superb poem.... Heart touching

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Harishkumarns 15 December 2017

Really heart touching sir

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Mercy Jerry 14 December 2017

My dear Abhi, your words ever so laced with emotions... Simple yet loaded. Great piece

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 14 December 2017

Thank you so much Mercy! ! !

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Linda Moore 11 December 2017

Your words stir the emotion. Well done

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 11 December 2017

Thank you dear, .

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Veerayya. b.m 13 November 2017

Hai abhimanyu Sir You writing very wel and meaningful, poems thought nearest to humanity values.

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Jan Sikes 13 November 2017

This is beautiful! Each word serves to deepen the feeling.

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Vikash Ranjan 22 October 2016

Very good poems...To the moment I can write In presence of my breath

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 May 2016

That I feel lonely on earth Under the roof of almighty I miss her to the extent The very extent of my existence. expression of beautiful sentiments in selected words...... thank you very m uch dear poet... love to read you......... tony

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Kushi Kush 29 October 2013

better luck next time for your love

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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

excellent second stanza. love your write.

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Kelvin Owusu 13 September 2012

a good poem good of u to share

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Anita Khelawan 25 July 2012

so subtle yet effective... i loved the line..'That I feel lonely on earth under the roof of almighty' thnx for sharing (:

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Your style is unique and too nice, keep it up

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Kayode Adebare 15 June 2012

Good one keep it up, i really love it More Grease to your Elbow

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Ramesh Rai 15 June 2012

No matter. a good poem dedicated to her

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Roong S 13 June 2012

It's so sad..you seem to know how to use words to express yourself..well done! !

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Uguru-okorie Joseph 18 April 2012

I envy the way you express your feeling, urge you to move on.

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