A Lonely Heart Comments

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful love poem. Thanks for sharing Kumar.

It reads even better the second time. Such a creative and compelling composition!

Loaded with love and loneliness. A creative and compelling composition!

Superb poem.... Heart touching

Really heart touching sir

My dear Abhi, your words ever so laced with emotions... Simple yet loaded. Great piece

Your words stir the emotion. Well done

Hai abhimanyu Sir You writing very wel and meaningful, poems thought nearest to humanity values.

This is beautiful! Each word serves to deepen the feeling.

Very good poems...To the moment I can write In presence of my breath

That I feel lonely on earth Under the roof of almighty I miss her to the extent The very extent of my existence. expression of beautiful sentiments in selected words...... thank you very m uch dear poet... love to read you......... tony

better luck next time for your love

excellent second stanza. love your write.

a good poem good of u to share

so subtle yet effective... i loved the line..'That I feel lonely on earth under the roof of almighty' thnx for sharing (:

Your style is unique and too nice, keep it up

Good one keep it up, i really love it More Grease to your Elbow

No matter. a good poem dedicated to her

It's so sad..you seem to know how to use words to express yourself..well done! !

I envy the way you express your feeling, urge you to move on.