Monday, June 1, 2009

A Lonely Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

So many memories leave me
Wondering what to do
I've left the pain in the past now,
Still my thoughts return to you
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RACHEL ZARANTONELLO
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Mona Martinez 01 June 2009

wow. straight from the heart and very powerful with every word you said. A past I won't hold onto A future, I cannot see When your heart is lost or lonely, Do you ever think about me? Why, I often wonder, after all that we've been through, Should I give up now? words that that made the poem so powerful. nice lines. i really enjoyed reading this poem. :)

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