A Lonely Heart Comments

Beautiful and powerful poem, Juan. It's so full of empathy and understanding of a far too common reality of the marginalized people around us. It's beautifully expressed and deeply moving. I'd give you a 10 but I see no place on this page to leave it.

Your sad poem which could have been entitled 'Too Late' and I wish I had written, is full of lost hope, desire and vitality to effect change. A rather frightening poem. Well done!