A Lonely Girl Comments

I HAVE NEVER SEEN A GREAT POEM LIKE YOURS EVER SINCE I GOT INTERESTED IN POEMS, I WOULD REALLY LIKE TO BE YOUR FRIEND AND SURELY WILL LEARN A THING OR TWO........AM TUMELO GENERAL. PLEASE BE MY FRIEND

I love your message, you are a truely great poet. I want you to be my friend! ! :) check out my poem 'unheard cries'

The poem goes perfectly... It was a masterpiece.. You write very well. I hope i could write as better as you are. You lonely girl.

Hey Janay! what a great poetic power you have at this tender little age? You are a fund of great talent which very few will have at this age. Who said you are lonely? Our great Savior is with us always who cares for us more than any one else. Trust him. He is with you, me and all of us, always. Thanks for inviting me to read your cute poetry. God bless you.

Damn nice poem, i love the idea of how it builds up nicely. I especially like the last words its pretty wow

it's really a good and inspiring poem... hmmm like it very much... inspiring a lot...above all it's very sweet and professionally done this poem with deep idea... yeah I am not wrong if I again say it that you are good poet with new subjects to express... sharing it if you will also like my expression of love based peace thoughts also(a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with.... afzal shauq) I am sure my this famous say will be satisfying your every worry about the humanity and social life and even friendship...yeah is the only answer to your questions raising in your mind about the happiest collective life.... yeah... we belong to same family of Adam...and we are true cousins..good friend...go on and on...

Very well written I love this poem its similar to things i write keep up the good work its very sad Kayla

A sad poem well constructed but goes deep, life is challenge and we all get a punch below the belt... how about a real happy poem and get dancing regards uavanice1

wow nice poem. i like it.... r u married or single. n than ur m or f

You will only find this someone (a Mister Right for you) by not taking the exit reserved for failures. You are not a failure as even this little poem shows. I would not throw away talent and all other qualities you have and will be able to enjoy in times ahead, for what? Hell's Frying Pans? You live just an hour away from me, in one of the most uplifting and beautiful cities on this planet. If you want to, you can talk to me. Confidentially and without feeling 'bad ' about it. I am on Bribie. H

So young! Too young to feel this way. sometimes the people we know, make us feel the worst. Think of this: Your poems are read by dozens, hundreds and maybe thousands, that you don't know about. If one verse you write makes someone change their life for the better, look how much you accomplished? I gave you a 10 that was much deserved.Look at life with opened eyes, not sad eyes.

Great poem. I can relate

Really well written I have also had an interpretation of 'lonely girl' Maybe you could have a look? , thanks, and you are very talented

I can relate to this poem looking back a parts of my childhood. Very well written! Thanks for sharing.

its beautiful, it sort of similar and very different at the same time either well its well written

please read my poem about blind faith

dont b lonely anymore.. im here joke.. has a Edgar Allan Poe vibe to it.. greatly done my good friend