A Lonely Cloud.....[nature Observation; Humor] Comments
I saw a lonely cloud one day.
It looked small beyond the Bay.
I tried to find a second and failed,
even though I looked each way.
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Like one Ice cream cone in two hands.... Great humor. This poem is even better than 'My Ingles Sucks'
This is a masterpiece, brilliantly crafted. I love the way you pen this piece. If Loneliness were a person, I pity how she is all by herself.
When I browse your poems, I just stop at this poem to read it again.
A cloud floating so high, but lonely.He may be proud, but can never be happy as he has nobody to share happiness.
Indeed, nice word Bri, I repeat now what Rob said. A nice poem, is my final conclusion, I enjoyed it
A wonderful write of a special sight, a solitary cloud floating all alone in an ocean of blue sky. Take care partner.
I hope one day I can write poetry just like you. I can't imagine being that good.
You have already demonstrated a fine young poetic talent from what I've read so far. I happened to notice (in 'Notifications' section of PH) that you'd visited my 'cloud'. thanks.
If you can imagine it, perhaps someday you will achieve that goal, or another goal as, or MORE worthy, like always being nice to people. : ) bri
I saw a solitary cloud just the other day, so I can appreciate your observations presented in such a lovely poem. Great poem Bri!
My thanks to....ALL READERS and commenters of my poem, PAST, PRESENT, or FUTURE. Special thanks for HONEST comments, bri : )
I say: attention: to ALL READERS and commenters of my poem, PAST, PRESENT, or FUTURE. Special thanks for HONEST comments, wheth
To all commenters here, past, present, and future, 'Thank You'! ! ;) bri
I love this...I always get a laugh out loud moment with your poetry. I can relate to that cloud.
Thanks, Simone. NOW, get back to your work! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ;)
Nice cadence to the lines. Enjoyable images with ironic feeling to them.
I just made this one of my favorites on PH. So THERE! ;) BRI Enjoy.
Let me quote from this amazing poem-Think of it! A single cloud. Its loneliness spoke to me aloud. I wonder how it felt up there. Was it very proud?
Feeling lonely is painful, no matter how big one may be! Enjoying the silence is one thing, but being without a companion is a different matter.
It is such a beautiful poem Bri.I have read it in one of your Showcase.Perhaps mentioned it in my comment.
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7/18/2025 1:52:33 AM # 1.0.0
I really WANT TO ALTER THE POEM'S TITLE. THIS POEM HAS NO HUMOR FOR ME NOW. I now say it is SERIOUS, BUT I can't figure out the edit procedure. Rats! bri