Saturday, August 10, 2019

A Lonely Blue Bird Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you do not love me why do you see me with half eyes?
Truthful eyes and color on your face contradict your lies,
You know, yes you know sweetheart that you love me,
Lovers know on the green earth Angles on the blue skies,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 August 2019

A very lovely, sweet and romantic poem. Birds are wonderful and beautiful creatures. They bring delight by their beautiful songs Beautifully written.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2019

O blue bird why are you alone where is your partner As a lovely friend I shall keep you in my waiting house, I shall not cage you I shall take care of you as a friend. But she went somewhere, perhaps she got a spouse......touching expression with outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Khalida Bano Ali 10 August 2019

Liked this romantic poem, a nice one.

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Khalida Bano Ali 10 August 2019

A nice poem on bird loving, a romantic one.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 August 2019

Reminds me of the song LADY WITH A BLUEBIRD popularized by AMERICA in 1984...10++++

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Kostas Lagos 10 August 2019

Really beautiful poem Akhtar!

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Jane Campion 10 August 2019

Well imagined. Love the images.

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