Saturday, August 4, 2018

A Lonely Bench Comments

Rating: 5.0

As long as a bench is lonely
and there are not two humans
sitting on it,
may be friends or may be lovers.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Geetha Jayakumar 08 August 2018

Beautiful poem. Bench should never be vacant, in fact it must be occupied by twosome to enjoy the beauty of nature together. Loved reading it.

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Red Soul 06 August 2018

To experience the joys of nature with another person is the best thing that anyone can hope for. A beautiful and somewhat tantalising poem! Thanks for sharing Jawad sahab.

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Valsa George 06 August 2018

This invitation to sit together and enjoy the beauty of Nature is so hearty in itself! The promise of a warm kiss makes it even more inviting!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 August 2018

and GOD also adopts management by exception full benches to see all are happy but a bench empty god even worries nice imagery sir

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Kelly Kurt 05 August 2018

Sharing a special moment makes it more special.

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Cheryl Tutaan 05 August 2018

God will overlook billions of benches that are not vacant. feelings of the flowers if scene will lack, I promise to add it with a warm kiss. A lonely heart, with a touch of sweetness depicted...Thank you for sharing, Akhtar...+++++10 You would also love to read my My Lovely Bench. Cheryl♡

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 August 2018

Akhtar, such a pretty poem👍👍👍

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 August 2018

A bench is not a bench if no one sits on it. A wonderful imaginative write with a meaningful message on togetherness and friendship.10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2018

Lonely bench waits for lovers to come and sit. Nature adores moment wearing colourful dress and flowers spread fragrance. Feelings are shared beautifully in silence. Love does miracle. A nice poem is interestingly drafted...10

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