A lone old oak tree
On the bank of the rice field
Stood the test of time
A witness to farmer's life
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A lone old oak tree On the bank of the rice field Stood the test of time.....beautifully expressed. An excellent poem.
Hello Rose the word of 'alone' gives very big weight to the theme of this poem, brilliant, always you are on top of the list, congratulations
chosen this abstract powerful imagery is shown the ability of professional poet, thank you for this unique masterpiece and onto my fav list with a giant 10+
There are so many such lonely trees found around the world.....and though a lot of passers-by would have crossed past those trees with special admiration only a very few would have wanted to file their admiration in poetic words for the treasury of poetry...this poem is one such from the poetry-treasury...kudos 10/10
Loneliness! ! Nature, Strong enough. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A magnificent well-thought poem and so loaded. A 10 Full Score and much much more. Thank you so much for sharing this brilliantly well-thought poem. God's Blessings for you and your beloved family.
Enchanting poem with powerful metaphors and well laid down, to remind us that thanks to this hard-working farmer, our daily bread is well distributed on our dining table, and not only in our generation but generations before us. The most excellent thought and fitting, thanks to the oak as the chosen metaphor, because the oak can be thousands of years old and can withstand all kinds of disadvantageous species.
This is a gifted write. It carries an image and an emotion and a thought to ponder- -such an excellent trio of gifts for your readers! 10+++++++++++++ and on to my Fav list! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Our forefathers planted a tree and we are the fruits, a delicious link to the past.
Sometimes it is nice to leave what you mean all unspelt. And this one leaves the reader with myriads of interpretations. He too takes an imaginative trip forward. A lovely laconic expression.
A lone old oak tree/On the bank of the rice field/Stood the test of time............magnificent poetic expression! A fabulous poem.....................................................10/10
A link to an earlier time......significant. Thank u.anjandev roy.
The old trees remind us of our ascendants we should plant new trees so that our descendants do not forget us.
Trees lend respect to time! May your poems stand like an oak!