A Lone Sparrow Comments

Just a sparrow building a nest and raising her young, and you weave it into such a lovely poem. Thanks.

Sweet narrative for a poem that says a lot about labour, mother love and care! ! ! ! Good read! ! ! !

A compelling and captivating composition my friend!

A lovely sweet story of a sparrow's home building, so diligently and so honestly. Nice way to give message to human society. Very nice way of teaching.

Story of how a sparrow builds a nest, lays eggs, and raises a family and protects her chicks. Beautifully described. Thank you.