A Lone Rose Comments

Sobering last line. All illusions and dreams must come to an end, to leave room for reality, now they must face the pain of waking. He to his family and she to perhaps a future new lover who will be free and true to their mutual love.

Beautiful love poem. Love never dies. Absolutely a very impressive write

Hazel this beautiful lost love story is a joy to read.As always beautifully written with a sad back story to grab the readers interest well done

Marriages are made in heaven but love is concocted upon this terrestrial earth! A charming poem portraying conflict of interests that yet brews up a heady cocktail.

the harsh relities of life where duty and responsibilities come first and demand self sacrifice................very lonesome poem of crushing dilema

A wonderful meeting and and an abrupt parting, leaving behind a handful of sweet memories to relish for ever! Now distanced by time, they remain two lone roses, both craving to be tied together into a bunch! A very emotive write!

Even though his wife's love had disappeared like a cruel magic trick, He is left with a cold, heartless home, His kids are his future, For his family name to endure Kids are the duty and bid a couple but we sometimes become helpless in love. An impressive poem.

So many beautiful words from the dance floor to the departure. Excellent! Hope this will not be a poison apple for children.