A Lone Masked Jagged Juggernaut Comments
Duckling in a small pool, you came on a whirlpool
Of a storm and tried to to see how another world
Fits your temperament, blazing unending duels
Words crossed, muggle, laughing most times
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Interesting poem in style and narration of a very complex subject as relationship. A great read. Congratulations for member poem place.
Thank you, Savita. I am as much delighted in your response as I was in writing the poem.
A panther will watch a potential prey, dark eyes Glinting, not committing to anything but relying on Logic, sorting evidences as facts and fiction, omission Thoughtful lines of a logical poem. Congrats!
A wonderful description of the difficulties that can be in a relationship. Pieced together beautifully.
Recall, you're the only one who has Truly loved me with unswerving loyalty Treated me with respect....very good poem and the explanation makes it better....... thank u dear poetess and congrats! ! tony
Congratulations on your thought-provoking poem being selected as Member Poem Of The Day.
Very peculiar poem in the shape of an hourglass~ :) Like a duckling and a baby panther trying to swim together, the tension can be felt there in the reading.
Hi Perdita. Indeed, they are. The panther was trying to be friends but the duckling would have none of it - the usual start of a relationship between mismatched personalities. :)
This is a most unlikely relationship but it happens all the time to two persons of clashing temperaments. :)
Hi Robert, it's an honor to be greeted by fellow poets. Thank you. :)
like to quote- Words tear and mend us, anger cuts Understanding clothes nakedness In time... ..Blood mixed in pungent brine Grimy after a fray.. ..... yet stopped in Recall, you're the only one who has Truly loved me with unswerving loyalty nice description 10+++
You're as amazing as the poem, Britte, to notice those details. Thank you. :)
As facts and fictions! ! Love and art. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
It's my pleasure, Edward, I share all the honor with those who read with appreciation. :)
Dear Doris, such a wonderful poem of the day...congrats for being chosen... big 10++++
It's twice the honor to be appreciated and understood. Thank you, Bernard. :)
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