A Lollypop Comments

Cute! This is really good with great imagery!

Wow, this is like really mushy, but good in a good way, you know? There's no personal connection with me to this piece, but if I was a chick then I would definitely like it. I swear. You have great imagery and the diction and syntax are perfect. You have long sentences that flow really well. Great job with the natural voice. It sounds spoken almost.

Oh Aylissa..I loved it. The poem is so true, feeling wise, and very adorable.

how cute! ! i enjoyed reading that. it made me giggle