Awaiting patiently
For a new sunrise to arrive
With my heart already healed
And my mind at peace,
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Romance in a living fantasy makes the reader feel for the subject and tell him to mount his white horse and ride out to find this dream lover..she is out there waiting go man go! Grand write Romeo...regards
Reality bites thats the reason we must live and die in our own worlds of fantasy.Reality is a machine.It has been programmed by men and commanded therefore.Only when it stops, it is thrown away or perhaps stopped for the another.
Go Romeo! What a tender, idealistic, yet realistic picture of love and relationship you paint here.
wow, again wow, you have filled your thoughts with fantasies of love what happens when loves knocks on your door? ? ? ? ? ? nicely written.
A nice romantic poem, an affirmation of desires and dreams of love shared in equal partnership, an honorable and caring sentiment showing honesty and a good heart. Hopefully she will arrive soon.
The best things comes when we do not expect! ! ! Than! ! ! It´s fantastic! ! ! Hold yourself! ! ! ! !
A fantastic romantic poem, ... I do hope all your dreams come true.
Wow! A beautiful poem... seems like what I have been looking for too :)
Romeo, oh Romeo, wherefore art thou Romeo - hope you find your Juliet real soon. Lovely poem.
Subjectivity is one of the traits of your poems. It makes your poem more authentic and impressive. Loved this job too.
May that someone hears your plea and hurry! Thanks for sharing!