Thursday, July 26, 2012

A Living Fantasy Comments

Rating: 4.8

Awaiting patiently
For a new sunrise to arrive
With my heart already healed
And my mind at peace,
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Romeo Della Valle
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Clarence Prince 27 July 2016

May that someone hears your plea and hurry! Thanks for sharing!

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Madhabi Banerjee 27 July 2016

excellent. I like it.well thought

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Sodoko Zavaki 15 October 2012

Awesome poem. I really like this poem =) Fantasy rocks =D

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Ken E Hall 05 August 2012

Romance in a living fantasy makes the reader feel for the subject and tell him to mount his white horse and ride out to find this dream lover..she is out there waiting go man go! Grand write Romeo...regards

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Robert Green 01 August 2012

A wonderful poem Romeo very well thought and written.

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Allemagne Roßmann 31 July 2012

Reality bites thats the reason we must live and die in our own worlds of fantasy.Reality is a machine.It has been programmed by men and commanded therefore.Only when it stops, it is thrown away or perhaps stopped for the another.

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Captain Cur 28 July 2012

Go Romeo! What a tender, idealistic, yet realistic picture of love and relationship you paint here.

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Charles Bernard 27 July 2012

wow, again wow, you have filled your thoughts with fantasies of love what happens when loves knocks on your door? ? ? ? ? ? nicely written.

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Danny Draper 27 July 2012

A nice romantic poem, an affirmation of desires and dreams of love shared in equal partnership, an honorable and caring sentiment showing honesty and a good heart. Hopefully she will arrive soon.

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Poetheart Morgan 26 July 2012

The best things comes when we do not expect! ! ! Than! ! ! It´s fantastic! ! ! Hold yourself! ! ! ! !

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Heather Wilson 26 July 2012

A fantastic romantic poem, ... I do hope all your dreams come true.

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Meena Mustafa 26 July 2012

Wow! A beautiful poem... seems like what I have been looking for too :)

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Valerie Dohren 26 July 2012

Romeo, oh Romeo, wherefore art thou Romeo - hope you find your Juliet real soon. Lovely poem.

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Neela Nath Das 26 July 2012

Subjectivity is one of the traits of your poems. It makes your poem more authentic and impressive. Loved this job too.

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