A Living Dream 20th Aug 11 Comments

Dream-journey narrated very well. Colours are many. A 'You' is illustrated well and at its end the subconscious meets with conscious, so your journey in real surface could take a gallop from any moment. Hold the rein by strict hand. Thank you......10

Full of fun an bright in color and much beauty sliding down that hole with many path's to choose and then the surprise end of journey and knowing smile for your forever file. Romance and longing in wonderful conclusion. You ARE a poet is what I can say for sure.. So much joy in reading your paintings for the mind to feast upon. Please give us more. Jim Troy

Sounds like an interesting dream. This is a very beautiful poem, I hope you continue to write more like this. You have a talent.