Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, April 20, 2010

A Living Dead Comments

Rating: 4.6

I am considered as living dead
No desire to be assertive and in position to lead
I am moving in public and looked healthy
I am in strong position and considered wealthy too
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Kunwar Patel 30 September 2010

I have stable position and earned good fame I don’t know how but any how it came I made it easy by remaining aloof

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loNeLY AnGel 01 June 2010

nice poem i must say this is very welled penned

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Erica Santana 02 May 2010

Yes it is a long poem great job

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Alexander Mcguire 27 April 2010

i loved it thnx for the suggestion your the living dead still trying to grasp the whole meaning in my head but still well worth the read

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D H 22 April 2010

We shall not feel dead in life, yet in near death we are alive and running. Long poem I care to re-read every paragraph is focused on the topic makes me want to go further. Great Poem

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Yll L 21 April 2010

living dead one should not feel life is what we make it and more than anything we should struggle and fight to move forward then... nice theme...

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Prashant Shaurya 21 April 2010

the contents fairly justify the poem's size sir.. and every paragraph forces the reader to read the next.. and also that you have been able to bring out everything you wanted to.. a brilliant piece.. 10+++ certainly... regards prashant

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Nimal Dunuhinga 20 April 2010

A long fine poem; 'Yes you cannot die until you die.'

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Rajaram Ramachandran 20 April 2010

A self introspection more on the poor quality of life lead and a positive outlook for a future expected as a result thereof, are well brought out in this fairly long poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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