Thursday, December 31, 2009

A Little World.........Mollys Garden Comments

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not very far
enrapped in secrecy,
a haven of peace,
in a little world,
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John Knight 29 March 2010

RITTY - The Gardens of our Youth - tended by our loving parents are the most perfect places on Earth. They are peaceful - tranquil - wind blown - shades and shadows - places of Prayer. Thanks for sharing Ritty - your last verse says it all. 'A garden so dear - Is rare to find - A refuge for soul - As the heart unwinds'. Love in Poetry - JOHN.

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Prashant Shaurya 07 February 2010

this one brought tears of joy in my eyes and i don't know how to make you believe this.. all i could do was add it to the list of my favorite poems.. you are a magician.. for your imagery takes me where you want me to.. and to be very honest i felt the same while reading Wordsworth's poem 'Daffodils..

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Mamta Agarwal 17 January 2010

a beautiful poem to read early in the morning. you have captured the serenity with lovely images i like the lines a confusion of colours yet tranquil reigns... love Mamta

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