Thursday, June 14, 2007

A Little While Longer Comments

Rating: 4.3

A little while longer we lie in this stillness of earth
The time silent, as it flies by to the ending of our mirth
Your presence brings peace in these moments sweet
Your touch release a stir long forgotten till now this meet
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Francois Hoon
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Ella Marien Jacobs 01 January 2010

Wow, this poem captured your emotions quite well! Nogals sweet c',)

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 September 2008

This is a very romantic piece that I cannot understand and therefore cannot recommend. GW62

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em blue 14 June 2007

I understand those sweet moments. you've captured them quite well here.

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Francois Hoon

Francois Hoon

Pretoria, South Africa
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